Category Archives: fundraising

The wrong kind of fundraising storytelling

Yes, you want the stories in your fundraising appeals to spark emotion in donors. But no, you can’t go crazy with it. If you overuse adjectives and metaphors, you risk ending up with drivel like this: “The awesome burden of … Continue reading

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Are you giving donors what they want?

Donors want action. Unfortunately, they might not be getting it from the appeals they receive. Donors see vague, abstract messaging like “give hope,” “stand with us,” “join our movement,” “make a difference” and other ambiguities. This vagueness is too common … Continue reading

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Why you DON’T want your donors to be readers of your fundraising appeals

You see it in a lot of fundraising appeals. The first few sentences of the letter force the donor into the position of being a passive reader as opposed to being a participant. The appeal might open with a discussion … Continue reading

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How to harness the power of good to make your fundraising appeals better

Many nonprofits aren’t giving donors what they want. And then those same nonprofits wonder why donors aren’t giving them what THEY want – donations. Donors want a whole range of things in exchange for their gifts. One of those things … Continue reading

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When not to use a freemium in direct mail fundraising

Why would a nonprofit tout their stewardship of donors’ money in an appeal and then throw in a bunch of free stuff? Not sure. But that’s what this one did. The appeal is from an international aid and relief charity. … Continue reading

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How two nonprofits are reacting in the Trump era

Lately, many nonprofits are finding that they have to worry about something they never even considered before. Sure, they had the usual worries about donor attrition, revenue, acquisition, retention, and so on. But now, on top of all that, they … Continue reading

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Could this be write for fundraising?

Emotion – not logic – is what moves donors to give, right? Then why do you see appeals based on logical arguments all the time? It’s probably because that’s how we were all taught to write. With deductive reasoning. You … Continue reading

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Are you leaving your donors stranded?

There’s a strange disconnect that you see in a lot of fundraising appeals. The appeal starts off heading in one direction, then suddenly leaves donors stranded and wondering what happened. Here’s an example. In this appeal, for a charity that … Continue reading

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Your donors need to feel like they belong

Fundraising appeals often fail to convey a sense of belonging to donors. That’s too bad. It means nonprofits are missing out on a major reason why donors give. Donors want to feel like they belong. They want to feel like … Continue reading

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Don’t hide from your donors — communicate with them

You really should be mailing and emailing your donors more often. Why? Because… Your donors want to hear from you. They want to know what your nonprofit is doing. They want to know when their help is needed. They want … Continue reading

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