Tag Archives: fundraising
Could this be write for fundraising?
Emotion – not logic – is what moves donors to give, right? Then why do you see appeals based on logical arguments all the time? It’s probably because that’s how we were all taught to write. With deductive reasoning. You … Continue reading
Are you leaving your donors stranded?
There’s a strange disconnect that you see in a lot of fundraising appeals. The appeal starts off heading in one direction, then suddenly leaves donors stranded and wondering what happened. Here’s an example. In this appeal, for a charity that … Continue reading
Your donors need to feel like they belong
Fundraising appeals often fail to convey a sense of belonging to donors. That’s too bad. It means nonprofits are missing out on a major reason why donors give. Donors want to feel like they belong. They want to feel like … Continue reading
Don’t hide from your donors — communicate with them
You really should be mailing and emailing your donors more often. Why? Because… Your donors want to hear from you. They want to know what your nonprofit is doing. They want to know when their help is needed. They want … Continue reading
How and why to get the copy voice right in fundraising appeals
Why would a nonprofit, say, one fighting climate change, use messaging like this for a fundraising appeal. … Dear Ms. Joan Sample, I am writing to you today from [charity], a dedicated advocate for climate action and environmental sustainability. As … Continue reading
One of the main reasons why donors give
It’s a strange quirk of nonprofits, but a lot of their fundraising seems intent on denying their donors the one thing that those donors want the most. Donors want action. They want something to be accomplished. Action on an issue … Continue reading
Grammar rules you can’t break in fundraising copy and some you can
Grammar rules? For fundraising copy? Yes. Hold on a minute. Shouldn’t fundraising copy be all informal and conversational? And doesn’t “conversational” mean that we routinely break so-called grammar rules and begin sentences with “and” or “but,” use contractions, end sentences … Continue reading
Why your fundraising appeal needs more urgency
There’s a moment when your donor looks over your direct mail or email appeal and thinks, “I’ll put this aside for now and maybe help with that a little later.” That’s the moment when you realize your appeal didn’t have … Continue reading
Why is the copy for direct response fundraising so weird?
It’s not weird, really. But it is way different from academic, business, or journalistic writing, and so it can seem weird to the (uninitiated) people at nonprofits who review copy. As my article in NonprofitPRO points out: Good copy is … Continue reading
Is this fundraising that works?
The overline at the top of the fundraising letter reads, “You can join your neighbors to help families facing hunger.” So far, so good. Everybody’s against hunger. Then, this: “Every $1 can help feed a family of 3!” One thing’s … Continue reading